View Single Post
Old 03-29-05, 05:03 PM   #18
Germ
in your system
 
Posts: 7,619
From: Adanac
IP:

yeah, i didn't think you kept a steady level of enjoyment, some lines were shitty, but some were pretty dope, and other i laughed at.....but whatever, first one back, keep up, it was decent to read, flow seemed off at times you, felt like you forced some shit and stretched some lines, you had some good multies and inners there, so, just fix some shit up and you be rollin again, word........keep up man........haha, ending made me luagh..pz
Send a message via AIM to Germ Send a message via MSN to Germ   Reply With Quote