Voted For: Premanition

prem~nice effective punch for you're opener, you have some creative lines in this verse, as well as good vocabulary, this flowed very well, which tied everything together, like you put some effort in instead of throwing something together as filler, good verse overall, i like the fan bar, and you're closer was strong, good job.1
metaman~lol@ the opener,effective punch there,but then you go into trying to rhyme text battle with laughable,which doesnt work,you're closing line was ok, not really an effective,hard hitting punch, but i see where you tried to go with this, i think..i thought you did ok in this verse, nothing really stood out, except the opening lines, since i thought prem had some creativity to his verse,i'ma have to give it to him, but good job both.1

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