Voted For: OneStepBeyond

one step beyond
half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*

*win though sounds like window... meh

liked ur punches
good lyrical choices
nice personals
iight structure
elevate a lil bit more & u b pretty good
8.5/10

skriptz
You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you

iight punches...not 2 many of em doe
structure was real simple and easy 2 read
lines and lyrics were sort of weak
elevate more
7.5/10
no hate skriptz

v/1stepbeyond

ay yall cud u plz check out my battle vs. thekid523 and showtime
please leave good adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back!

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