Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

i thought lyrically, this was close...nothing really stood out here, but here goes...
casper~your opener was kinda weak,it was ok, not really strong to hold up the rest of the battle verse,not many effective punchlines, the 50 bar was ok, again, no real personals on this kid,except the personal against him battling stanza,which you didnt explain much, i think overall,this verse was ok, you could have come stroneger in all, but keep it up..1
dumb d~good opener, for a personal,not bad, i like the personal on "casper the friendly ghost",lol, again,the following punch was pretty strong about the baby picture,good line, the stuey line was pretty effective too, because it went with what you said previously, nice way to tie it together, i thought your closer was ok, could have been stronger,seemed like you just gave up, but redeemed yourself with the no-show line, all in all your verse was decent, i thought you had more punches in your verse,therefore i think you take this battle..1

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