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Old 03-29-05, 07:52 PM   #11
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Voted For: MetEoR-K

meteor-k~good opener, i liked all the name personals and the punchlines, they were pretty effective here,nothing was too strong though, you could have came harder in some areas, but all in all, you pretty much sum'd it up with this kid and the eminem disses, i like the dirty dozen,std line, and you rcloser was was good, overall good verse..1
eminem~decent punchlines, but no real personals,so none really hit that hard, i liked how you bought up the MERK in his name, that was the strongest punchline here, in your verse, i thought you as well, could have come harder, but considering meteor-k had just a verse of name disses, i had to give it too him for being consistent with the punches....but pretty decent job both.1
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