Voted For: Kesse

wow i really think kesse got this, flow i thought ur verse didnt have much content.. u werent saying much just useless little tid bits of info.. your verse was good nice vocab and everything but the emotion just wasnt there.. the only REAL nice part you had was like the last couple lines in italic print... Kesse your verse was pretty nice u had decent imagery.. a pretty good story line.. your still lacking emotion but you didnt do bad.. it seemed like u were over-vocabbing.. but u still had enough to win this with the imagery...

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