Voted For: ! ShowtimE !

showtime~nice verse, i thought it was witty,your vocabulary was good here, nice punches, very creative, refreshing to see different types of punches, they stand outyou had some effective personals here, i like the biblical miracle bar, i believe its the 3rd bar,and the 4th bars, i thought were your best, but i liked how you took risks with your vocab..overalll good drop.1
lyrical~your opener was decent,i thought could have been stronger, you had some personals here,but i just dont think you tried hard, you used a lot of filler words, instead of punches,i'm not hating at all,i'm just stating the style that i like, it also seems you used a lot fo filler in your verse, and your spelling wasnt that great, i think this is more of an audio type drop..because of the brackets of where you cut it off and the structure of it, although i liked your rhyme scheme and what you were going for, i'm going to vote showtime for a more creative,overall well put together verse....keep it up.1

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