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Old 03-29-05, 08:40 PM   #14
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Voted For: ~Babylon~

babylon~DAMN, dope topical verse, i like how your words were very descriptive, and the imagery was intense, you had this set-up well, and set the scene with the tone of your words well, which sucked me right in to the story, nice vocabulary, very creative,and the ending was killer, very well done man..1
mista~your vocabulary was good as well, you also set the tone well and the scene with your words, the whole vampire story, which, you carried out well, i thought the ending could have been better, because you did such a good job on setting the story up, good job both of you, but as for creativity and and the surprise factor in babylons story,i must give this to him...dope battle guys..1
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