Voted For: Ikynovel

wow, dope topical.......here goes..
anxiety~your vocabulary was good here, nice imagery in your words, couldnt really find a problem, its just a matter of taste, i thought that your stroyline was good, but i felt i needed something more,something to keep my interest, hmm, you were heading towards a dope ending it seemed, but then i dont know what happened, it seemed to cut short, i was expecting more to this,but overall it was a good drop..1
ikynovel~your words are very descriptive and set the tone of this story well, nice imagery as well, your vocabulary is great, i mean,you explain everything so well,this was deep, it seemed it was well thought out, very creative topical verse...for that i must give this to you..but good job both of you, i enjoyed reading this.1

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