I'll be dropping critique in this fashion from now on: This is the feed I dropped in E.C.'s audio...very extensive...



How did I listen to this track?
Headphones or Speakers: I listened through speakers w/subwoofer

1-10 (10 being the highest)
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Flow: (fluidity/complexity/originality): 6


Rhyming: (Multies/complexity/appeal): 6


Lyrics: (Originality/creativity/complexity): 6



Energy: (intensity/focus): 5



Delivery: (Rhythm/creativity/efficiency): 4

50 pts. maximum>>>>>>Your Score:_____27_______
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Beat selection: decent beat


The Good: the beat, your voice, some lyrics


The bad: your delivery


The ugly: vocal quality


Final Word: this track was lackluster at best because your delivery

is monotone...Plus, your quality took away from the listening

enjoyment


Recommendations: Work on vocal quality...make them more

crisp...use more inflections in your voice.



Final Grade:______C_______
A = 50-40
B = 39-30
C = 29-20
D = 10-19
F = 0-9