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Old 03-29-05, 09:25 PM   #11
Tha Q
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How did I listen to this track?
Headphones or Speakers: I listened through speakers w/subwoofer

1-10 (10 being the highest)
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Flow: (fluidity/complexity/originality): 5


Rhyming: (Multies/complexity/appeal): 5


Lyrics: (Originality/creativity/complexity): 6



Energy: (intensity/focus): 6



Delivery: (Rhythm/creativity/efficiency): 4

50 pts. maximum>>>>>>Your Score:_____26*_______
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Beat selection: I liked it...not bad


The Good: the beat, your energy


The bad: your delivery


The ugly: flow


Final Word: this track was lackluster at best because your delivery

is monotone...Plus, your quality took away from the listening

enjoyment


Recommendations: It sounds like you're reading...work on flowing on beat, to the beat, and with the beat...Also, use inflections in your voice...I can't decipher some of your lyrics


*Final Grade:______C_______
A = 50-40
B = 39-30
C = 29-20
D = 10-19
F = 0-9
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