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Old 03-29-05, 09:26 PM   #11
fluidmoon
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Voted For: final

wicked one~nice vocabulary in your verse, some good punchlines, but i saw no real personals here, yet you did have creative lines, your verse was strong throughout,but for the closer,i expected something stronger,and more hard hitting..you said"you winning,is like people trying to fight cancer", which if you think about it, doesnt seem very hard hitting...just being honest here, other then that,i thought, you had great vocabulary and creativity in your verse..1
final~nice openerthought it wasa pretty decent personal, nice wordplay in the next bar..lol@ the gunit bar,and "you all rap the same" punch, effective,hard hitting punch, your closing bar added more to this battle verse, overall strong verse here, again,creative punches, because of stronger disses in his verse,i have to give this to final..but good job overall fellas.1
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