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Old 03-29-05, 09:46 PM   #4
Tha Q
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How did I listen to this track?
Headphones or Speakers: I listened through speakers w/subwoofer

1-10 (10 being the highest)
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Flow: (fluidity/complexity/originality): 6


Rhyming: (Multies/complexity/appeal): 6


Lyrics: (Originality/creativity/complexity): 4



Energy: (intensity/focus): 6



Delivery: (Rhythm/creativity/efficiency): 6

50 pts. maximum>>>>>>Your Score:____28*______
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Beat selection: chintzy...not good


The Good: I liked your energy and voice

The bad: track is too short to be of any value...unless ur lyrics were super dope, which they were not


The ugly: hiss in your track...lyrics were forgettable...in fact, I don't even remember them


Final Word: This track was banal and subpar...there were no elements that stuck out, except for the hiss in your track.


Recommendations: Run light hiss redux...take the time to write lyrics for a track that's at least 2 minutes long...work on delivery...Ur not bad actually...I like ur voice and ur flow has potential


*Final Grade:______C_______
A = 50-40
B = 39-30
C = 29-20
D = 10-19
F = 0-9
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