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Voted For: Bonecollector
uh, this wasn't that great of a battle
dumbddumb....only good line was the personal bout his names, all the rest, you just kept repeating 'bone collector" in them, so they came off really weak, your structure and what not was fine, but i think bonecollector had harder punches/personals, but neither had that great of stuff.....both can elevate still
BC, opener and second last bar is what got you this, thought they hit bad, but you have to fix up your structure a little, and your last line, i think you forgot one,,,,,,,,this is definately not your best work, and i hope you work on some shit next time
v/bone collector.....no hate, this was a weak battle
Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.
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