Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

okay......

stanza....man, alot of your shit was whack...like that same sex mother line, i think you just picked things that would rhyme cool, your shit lacked complexity, context, and creativity....nothing special at all....your finisher had potential....but your wording was garbage and the set up line ended up being stretched....so, this isn't that great compared to what ive seen you write, and you didn't really stay consistent
I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws
U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law
^ that = not a diss
after reading this battle...you need to elevate....word

dumbdumb or whatever....thought you came harder....actually throwing punches directed at stanze...good playing off his name there......word, i think you can get a little more complex with your punches though, add some more wordplay and shit....but overall, you took this battle, stanza was just babbling and rhyming cool, you actually dissed him pretty much every bar, so you get my vote

v/dumbndumb

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