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Old 03-30-05, 12:44 AM   #12
Stanza
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Voted For: Kid*Kapone

RTF in the link in my sig Please I only need one more
Aii This is What I Think

Dfunk

You need some elevtaion I Think that you Shouldnt put ya verses into "stanza'z" Bcuz that makes it look like your typin a story and that makes it look tha much boring ......I think Tha you should try a style change *jus a suggestion*
But you didnt do very well In this battle But maybe next time

Kid*kapone
Now you didnt do th ebest but you did enough to win this battle i feel that you need to work on ya structure A whole lot LOL bcuz tha shit is Fucked up i like ya style though Keep up the good work And youll do wat you do

RTF in the Link in my sig...........Please I only need ONE more PLEASE
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