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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Nephew- 1st off it's not neccasary to number your bars. Anyway your structure was decent and flow was pretty good. Saying you'll fuck his mum is played to the max. No really clever or original concepts. Lol whats with mentioning crunk juice so often. Anyway you need to elivate your punches.
MarvJay- I enjoyed reading your verse basicaly every line was dope.
nice multi's on this one
u should of know dont go at jay he's a vet,i'll merk u with my weakest text...
i'll heat-ya-flesh if i squeeze-a-tech ya breathin left...homie u meetin-death
Overall Marv had this easy simply because his punches and word play was better Nephew up ya game and you'll be dope. return the favor plz !!!!!
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