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L.E
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada |
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
Hmm...this was close.
Metaphor...you had some nice punches and personals. They were hittin' hard, and I was feelin most of them. You were lacking in flow and structure though...make ya lines shorter, or put commas in them. Some lines are too long. Throws the flow way off.
Hammer...better flow and structure than Metaphore. But, your punches and personals, though hard, were slightly...just SLIGHTLY...weaker than Metaphores. This was a close battle, and hard to choose from, but Metaphore gets it. No hate, just elevate.
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