Voted For: Murdz

murdz
…dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat…
…Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet…
…Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life…
…Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice…
…And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar…
…Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart…
…You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled…
…Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle…

nice punchlines
good structure
i liked ur disses at opponent
pretty good elevation
nice closure
overal verse was pretty nice
8/10

dfunk
This nigga Murdz one of them online nerds /
RV be his domain, on the net he looks for men tryin' to get laid /
A fuckin' closet faggot /
Boy George and Elton John magnet /
He a little rat with a human head that's designed to snitch / Fuckin faggot postin' gay shit on RV is your habit /
Betta drop that or get pierced with a rusty hatchet /
Can't fuck with none of my shit stupid, yet alone match it /
I'll make a gay midget fuck the shit out of you G /
And let your whole family watch it and see /

pretty weak verse
elton john line was gay
not dat many good punches
only a few punches and sum aint even land
work on elevatin more
use better lyrics
expand vocab
6/10
no hate
my v/murdz

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