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Old 03-30-05, 03:24 PM   #21
Sik Wit It
 
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Look Loyalty don't toy with me, I threaten ya game/
Although you're destined for the stars...on the ends of your name/
You're over son, and even though I just flow for fun/
It only took me 10 lines to make your record 0-1/

VS

Nothing

Each took this one, pratically had the punches
that were pretty decent, structure was good
& the vocab was okay...
...Loyalty your verse wasnt as good, your structure
was just everywhere, your punches werent really there
and your vocab was okay, but overall elevat though

RTF Each

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