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affinity.....alot of your stuff was really basic, like, you have some good ideas, but your wordplay isn't that great, and you need to elevate your vocab too....and think your punches out more so they will come across harder and more effective.......and try to get more creative..
U aint Extraordinary, so stop thinkin ur the village chef
I don’t care bout ur belief, if ur Christian, ill bite the beef
^ to be honest, i don't know what that was suppose to do, i never knew village chiefs were extraordinary?....but, you really need to word things better, up vocab, get more creative and complex with your punches.........you had a good line, the sky's peak one, but that was it, everything else was kinda whack....

mcF....decent punches.......i think your personals were what won it alone....structure flow, nothing wrong.....nothing speical with wordplay.....i thought two lines won this for you......
An affinity's an obsession, and I'll explain the definition
"His affinity for dickriders won him our last competition"
That's it, you're gettin' smoked, I'm the boy with the cig
And the only buzz you got in hip hop, is that toy in your sig
^ word, those personals hit pretty good, i thought anyways, best lines.......uh, thought that motorized weed killer line was dumb......but overall, this was an easy battle to decide.....you took this one.....but it wasn't your best.....keep up

v/mcfiretruck

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