The Ups and Downs of Life
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iight rtfing.... arright, this isn't too bad, your delivery is o.k, but some of your lines are too long and it fucks up the flow of the song, it was real short, quality was touch and go, i couldn't understand everything you said, i thought you waited too long to start spitting once the beat kicked in, story was pretty consistent, just need some polishing on the skills. keep droppin songees...1
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