Voted For: rooq

rooq

i'll fill this fool With-Holes Imposed by Lead-Prose/
wid Deft-Flows, i'm known to have Left-Foes in their Death-Throes/
Phive knows he couldn't step to me with his Best-Shows/
so lay low bitch and stick to gettin yer dick blown by Text-Hoes/<< NICE OPENER, GOOD FLOW
Phives lines Ain't-Tight, they tha most stretched on this site/
i'll have you Take-Flight, then snipe you down from Great-Heights/<<DECENT
beatin me won't happen like nymphos sayin No-to-Sex/
Hold-a-tec to mah neck and you'd still not be a threat/<<HEARD B4
this bitch Chasin-Respect by tryin to Slay-me-in-Text?/
i'll strike tha Nape-of-his-Neck n leave this kid wrecked/<<IIGHT
cos i thrive on fryin snide bitches like phive alive/
saliva drippin as i drive knives through his sides/<<NICE PUNCH
who'd want to "lay phive" when dudes got No-Penis?/
gift-wrap this battle and bitch still Won't-Seize-This/
Fact-Is you well Practiced at tha art of tha Crap-Dis/
you only unchallenged at forumalating Wackness/
this Phive-is-Fakin, actin like he's No-Counterfeit/
mah Rhymes-will-Break-Him, fact is he's Now-Found-Defeat.<< IIGHT CLOSURE

LIKED UR PUNCHES
GOOD STRUCTURE
EASY 2 READ
PRETTY GOOD ELEVATION
OVERALL NICE VERSE
8.5/10

phive

lyrics like yours might leave people gaspin,

thats cuz they cant breath when theyre laughin,<< MEH OPENER

you dont even have enuf battles to be called a has been,

Why battle g, why not rap in open mic

you beatin me is like tryin ta fuck a dyke,<<DYKE AND GAY PUNCHES R PLAYED

its not happenin its just too hard,

clean up ya structure kid, and put on some right guard,<<ATTEMPTED PUNCH

yo shit stinks worse than mexicans and toe tags,

when you walk by people, they say look at those fags,<<PLAYED

i lyrically make mince meat outta ya brain,

when i spit its toxic like acid rain,<<OK

makin niggaz fear me cuz theyre little bitches,

i hit harder than kamikazis in an aiplane,<<ABOVE LINE DOESNT EVEN RHYME

my lyrics are hard ta chew like beef jerky,

this kids name sounds like he fled from turkey,<<NO!

time ta close ya dream, and freeze ya brain like ice cream,

make ya blood green, hit with precision, nice and clean

its over kid Quit starin at the screen,<<AVERAGE CLOSURE


overall weak verse
not 2 many punches
work on elevatin more
try 2 get many more punches at him
pretty weak
6/10

no hate
my v/rooq


ay yall cud u please check out my battle vs. thekid523 and showtime
please we bof need feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
please rtf on da battles
holla back!

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