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Old 03-30-05, 07:56 PM   #12
sdizzle
GONE... I QUIT
 
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From: Dirty Bean
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Originally Posted by KiNg SoLo
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
funny, nice opener!
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
NO! not feelin this!
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
pretty gud!
kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it
not bad.......

dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
nice personal, gud opener!
cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
alright punch!
fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
nice!! gud multi, nice meta!!
u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....
bleh!! weak closer!

V/- MarvJ



^ its a simile ... similes use like or as, metaphors are a direct comparison

sdizzles mad monkeyish today is a metaphor

sdizzle is like a monkey today is a simile

see?
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