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Old 03-30-05, 08:09 PM   #18
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
Posts: 7,487
From: East Coast
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could tell genious was high.
you coulda came way better,
Ya got FAKE CREDENTIALS, try me? I'll BREAK ya DENTALS..
Fuck SAKE i'm MENTAL, fillin ya wit more lead then fucking PENCILS..!
comon dog.
and pretty much the rest of the verse was a high freestyle.
no hate cuz you a good cat, but say no to high drops
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chaos ya shit ya pretty good
G sending wack Punches, they must be hidden in stealth.......
Cuz u beatin me in a battle?
is like Playing wit ya Inner "Child"cuz you only "Kiddin" ya self........
good
that was ya best line, the rest was aiight.
just re structure ya shit and reword some of it, it'll read better

/ chaos