Voted For: mizz fyre
Vote for mizz fyre
this battle seemed akward than a bitch an' a half, but here:
BKadAnt:
Trust I got da green you need either cash or grass
Rushin home cuz only da livin room can fit the stash
-wtf, nothin here,nopunch weak
Huge stacks built tall and thats only my 'fifty'
Cuz Im makin dat money so 'Bank$' get wit me
-nigga pleaz, weak, self-glorification, nothin
Im good in 'the game' cuz Im runnin da 'yayo'
Im hood in the brain got 'sha money' on payroll
-fuck dawg, nothin again, no punching
It's a dilemma Kelly Rowland can I pay your bills?
Got chedda Nelly holdin weight'll break high heels
-not a damn thang here, no closer
-overall:aight rhyme for just a fuck around verse, but dawg, no punches were swung at all, in tha least bit, clown tha mothafucka that ya battle cause ya ain't got shit here but words nigga
mizz fyre:
Came from the gutter, no father, barely had a mother
doing time for murder, still he looked up to his brother
-can be considered a light jab goin' at his esteem,still ain't much so don't think it's much
growing up, so rough, no-one to help him with his dreams
stuck in a trap, he'd never get out of, or so it seemed
-light hook on 'em, lil bit of downplay in this bar
teamed up with a friend, worked hard, days seemed neverending
determined to save everything he had, hardly ever spending
-lil sumthin', sayin' he a broke ass nigga wit dreamz that he workin hard for but they ain't comin
attending business meetings, sometimes falling asleep, so tired
but kept on going coz by his son, he was so inspired
-glorified his determination-nothin
10 years on, school reunion, he's not what peeps expected
bowing down at his feet coz money's made him respected
-glorified his doe,-nothin
lost his fam in the process thats when times were tough
gambling, coz what he had then was never enough
-not feelin it
now cash in hand, it means nothing, what he wants he can't buy
nice house, nice car, still somethin missin, can't figure out why
-showin his depression, very lil
tryna remember his sons laughter, but its all in vain
had his heart broken, he knows money can't ease the pain
-no 'battle' closer material, but yea
-overall:mizz, ya needa stick to ya topical thang, you was tryin to work that type of rhyme here, you gotta clown, downplay, high-side, murk, diss, an kill a nigga on this shit gurl. check that for future reference, you had some multis though
this shit go to mizz for havin somethin that nicked ol dude an ol dude didn't do shit so thats what it be people
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=119107