Voted For: Nostradamus

Aiight ... this was actually close...

LF:

I would say your better at text, but not bad at topicals either... You had the vocabulary out of both the verses... but the 3 things i look for most in a topical battle are imagery, Creativity, And emotion. Your emotion wasnt too bad, but your story line was like everybody else. You didnt come original and i hate verses like that. And your imagery was decent but you werent vivid or descriptive enough

Overall: 6.5/10

Nos:

Your verse definately took the categories of creativity and imagery. You came from a different angle for the topic, and thats what im looking for. It was original yet simple. Your emotion was OK but wasnt much there except for last couple lines. Vocab wasnt really there but you took all the other categories here so you got my vote.

Vote: Nos

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