Voted For: d.j em sce

Aiight look. This was extremily close for a few reasons.
For starters, Creativity, your verse was origional and it was real.. You were writing about a true story which always beats just writing fiction. I did like your verse......BUT having said that, your direction in the verse was a bit lost at times.. A lot of your lines looked like meaningless filler.. And there wasnt much use of multies at all from what I can see.. Which was dissapointing..

Flow-- Your verse was everything Creative's wasnt, but the only reason he edged you out was because his shit was origional and true. I feel bad not giving you the vote because your rhyming scheme and flow was a lot better than creative's.. But in the end, topicals are about meaning, so I have to give this one to the origionality that creative put into his verse..

Much respect to both.
But creative just gets the vote here by an inch..

Peace.

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