iight....ya lyrics was good i aint really like your deilvery tho....u could have got more into da shit....if u had a hard beat like dat u shoulda got more hard wit ur voice and how u delivered your shit....other than that it waz good....u got dat beat off jay-z....sumthin like dat beat...i gots experience wit rappin aloud so i knows what im talkin bout....but other than the voice thing it was good....keep dat shit up 1

-be E.Z.