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Old 03-31-05, 01:05 AM   #23
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Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

both drops were pretty weak nothin special both need to elevate....

But since i gotta vote for someone I'ma vote for Nock... You had 1 line of wordplay which was more than he had so you win that categorie........ Your vocab was pretty basic your end rhymes were nothing difficult but you addressed that this is his first time thats a bonus for you and your closer was better next time add hard punches and some metas


Solo your first line was weak which is not good first always gotta pack a punch..... Good job rhymin his name but you tryed rhymin to hard which killed the line it was forced..... Spell things right in your next battle it makes it look better and also do somethin with your structure like center or bold maybe different font it makes it look like you tryed best lin in your verse was

he thinks he dope cuz he can spell anutha rappers name wrong

would have been better if you didn't misspell another since you are talking about spelling you contradicted yourself.... Good luck to you in the future keep elevatin thats the key.....

V/ Nockternul
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