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Voted For: Nostradamus
you win, your flow was way better and it was alot easier to read, i also thought your verse was alot more over all beter
NOS, you had good strucutre and your lines werent strechted, you also had alot better feel to the topic and came alot more orignal, you cuold have had a lil more emotion but your story telling was good, it would have sounded alot better if you where rapping this, but good vocab and great use of the topic, you could have put and applied alot more effort to this, but pretty decent, although i have read better from you
flow, you are really getting better at this topical shit, maybe we shoulf battle eachother it shoudl be a good battle, but i can also see you spitten this alot better than ow it is written, it has alot of flow to it which is good, i kinda got bored fo your shit but your story was good and had more emotion just that i got bored, just try to shorten your lines and add alot more metaphores in this shit and it will be doper
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