Voted For: MaRVJay1009

so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
^^^ Like da opener pretty thoughtful
let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK"
^^^ha ha
ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team.....
u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine"
^^ HUH?
kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru..
ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl"
^^O.K
all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him...
if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton"
^^^ Very nice closure very creative

marvjay1009- da opener was pretty creative and i liked it,nice punches throughout the whole verse. Heres sum stuff u need 2 work on....work on more word choice, elevate sum more and yo will be a pretty nice emcee. I liked all da disses and creativity u used throughout ur verse
overall 8.5/10

.K.onfliktz
This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..
^^ Nice opener
"shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor"..
Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders..
^^ lol very creative nice word choice
Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops..
Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!..
^^ Nice
Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network..
Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked"..
^^basic
Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh
^^ average closure

.K.onfliktz
i liked ur verse as well
this was a very close battle
u had so many puches that were well thought off
i liked ur rhymes and word choice
no hate
u tried 2 fit alot of lyrics in one line which made the lines get crammed up a bit
work on fixin dat n u b str8

my v/marvjay1009

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