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Old 03-31-05, 09:16 PM   #13
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Lyrical- you had an alright verse work on your punches and your structure.. you had some good ideas that i thought you could have done alot more with overall ... but i liked your verse

kid- your getting alot better ... and i mean ALOT your structure was on target .. but your flow was off i thought. you had some alright punches but none that hit as hard as lyricals ... thats the only reason i think your going to lose this battle.. so elevate some more but you are getting the right ideas


overalll lyrical took this because he had a better flow and a lot better wordplay over all no hate to the kid 523 because he is getting better and working on his shit which earns him mad respect in my book..
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