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Old 04-01-05, 01:57 AM   #8
Kawn Flixx
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This was a dope piece...
Really liked it alot...
It had lots of emotions...
Lots of feeling...
Structure was off...that the only thing you have to work on
Other then that it was a good drop..
Nice wordplay... and vocab..
Keep it up hope to see another drop from you .
8/10
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