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Old 04-01-05, 03:58 AM   #19
Zuluflow
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Ight King solo 1st

^^ He checked out this little shit and then Acuity looked perplexed…
I see u can’t understand ?? Well after all u did admit u sucked at text…
Acuity learn how to battle u ho, I’ll give u time to go “read-my-threads”…
How you even get votes when ure shit gets slept on like “king-size-beds”…

^^^Opener was weak, the personal was prolly good, iono i cbf clickin the damn link
slept on punch is prolly the most played shit on the net, come with more original shit

My skillz x 12 Linez = me winnin…I multiply my lyrics like mathematics…
U ain’t got shit on me, u belong wit herbz! Bunch of certified wack-addicts…
I admit…Ure Shit! Just Quit! Didn’t think I’d have to beat on a fellow Brit…
Tha way u spit, it’ll be like smokin weed wit a druggy, u’ll never get a hit…

^^lmao @ rhymin mathematics with wack-addicts.. druggy punch was ight..

Wit u blowin gas u’ll never surpass my class when I got multies in mass…
But Alas! I must end this, u can have an acute vision of me ownin ure ass…
KING SOLO JUST WHORED you, but I got a nice spot for u on my shelf…
What to call it……I KNOW!!
Ass Clowns United, RV Insists That You go there, they even wanted to help…

^^ ownin ur ass was a bit homo.. closer was waaaaaay stretched man.. but lyke i said in the feed, it almost hit..

now for Ac

Like Mase your wack, and just like him, only 3 or 4 ppl care that your back
Failed to elevate despite ur every endeavour, I'll win this cos I'm "Jus Plain Better*"

^^opener was weak, try not to use the werd 'lyke' 2wice in one lyne..
next lyne was ok..

"The Revolution Has Begun"**, as ppl here witness the fall of this "king's" empire
Steal a win of me? got bout as much chance of gettin away with it as winona ryder

^^ 1st lyne was not a punch.. winona ryder is played..

His rhymes old and played like ancient musical relics, his rhymes pathetic
Im a physicist, so ill equate him like solving equations in physics

^^ the schem/flow here is all out man, think about what u writin b4 'and' aftah u ryte it..

Every1 knows this "king" a homo, thats why he still single and "solo"
He places an ad every week, with a hidden message behind.... "looking 4 a queen"

^^ thius is betetr, u got a setup, then a punch.. u need more bars lyke this.. still this was weak..

He branded himself with a parental advisory for kickin "infinte-lyrikz***"
Cos ppl need to be warned that even tho he's wack he just keeps spittin

very weak closer man.. save ur best punches 4 opener & closer..

Overall.. My vote = King Solo
he got a 5 / 10, as opposed to Ac's 3 / 10

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