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Old 04-01-05, 05:28 AM   #8
Parallel
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hmm thsi was good nice stucuture. vocab was ight but when you split up the words like fence-ing and shit i didnt like. the start of the verse was more better. compaired to the end you must off lost it and just wanted to drop early or somin i kinda do that sometimes. but damn i never really knew ya lyrics was that good. damn. nice flow shit i like this, 1
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