Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marvjay1009
ya'll think dis kids a crook? naw..cant keystyle gotta get ya book awww
ya lines is "candy" ppl dont reply cuzz u suck they dont "MiSS Da GOOD BaR"
^^^ NICE OPENER
i hope u gota crew fam go get wun of ya boys da come try me
i dont mean da "leaf" if orion live i'll go 2 da hospital & "poison" his "iV"
^^^ IIGHT PUNCH
i aint with games young im grown..ya moms i dont luvin da bone
so now when i call her its "4-HEaD" like da "front of ya dome"
^^^MEH
ya bars they weaka..trust me i got thugs dat a pome they heata's
clap at ya legs & leave ya "CaVS" in ya "lebron james sneaker's"
^^HA PRETTY THOUGHTFUL
ur a net mc...u'll be on here by da time im earnin millions...
ya cd hott? no u couldn't "PUT OUT FiRE" runnin up in a "burnin buildin"
^^IIGHT CLOSUE-PRETTY AVERAGE THOUGH

i liked sum of ur punches
pretty decent verse
structure was nice
elevate sum more though
8/10


ORION
You have no presence... but you're in awe of my charisma…
I'll dispose of every Key you have and treat you like a prisoner…
^^ ALRIGHT OPENER
This shit's a synch I don't flinch, specially in front of this fagget-ass-bitch…
Eh Put ya Money where ya Mouth is, so me-n-my bat can 'Strike Rich'…
^^ATTEMPTED PUNCH
Coming up in NYC? Looking For Rep? might as well call me ur idol…
'Fag', 'Slut', 'Bitch', 'Cunt'.... u have the RIGHT to all Those Titles...
^^^PLAYED LINE
tha loser’s circle’s the tool shed, so im putting this hoe in his place…
no skills to embrace, this fag’s a disgrace to the established race…*
^^NICE LINE
I strike like a Nazi blitzkrieg, bark rhymes in German while dissectin' this feeble Jew
But I refuse to make fun of his spelling - cuz evinn disslecksikxs arr teople poo
^^LIKE DA CLOSURE PRETTY THOUGHFUL AND CLEVER

nice punches
sum of dem didnt land though
nice structure
clever word usage
work on elevatin a little more
7/10
no hate

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