Voted For: Elementality

Lemme break this down...

Opener - Element, Kids wasnt evem a punch...
Closer - Element, Kids hit himself harder...
Punches - Element, Kid was hitting himself...
Personals - Neither, didnt see any...
Metas - Element, Kid didnt have any...
Multies - Element, Kid didnt have any...
Vocab - Element, Kids was elementary
Structure - Element, Kids was sloppy as hell...
Comedy - Element, wtf is Kid doing...

As you can see from above it is obvious that Elementality took this one and I know that the polls will show this.

The Kid: Learn how to do this shit properly dawg, no hate. Elevate your vocab and make your punches hit your opponent rather than yourself. Self-glorification is wack, dont use it. Also, structure your verse neater so it looks better. And try using personals and multies, they help your verses overall effectivness.

Elementality: Your verse was sick. Only areas for improvment I would have to say are first of all use bigger words when using multies and try using personals aka punches that could only be thrown at your opponent rather than anyone. Youve got the structuring, vocab and comedy down...lookin dope. Keep it up and hope to see more of your verses in the future...

V/Elementality............