not bad..flow is on point..good use of multis..vocab is nice..structure is good..its nothing special but its a solid drop..try incorperating metaphores and wordplay within your verses..but other than that..good drop man..

Return the favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184555
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184554
Pz.

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