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Old 04-01-05, 03:05 PM   #3
Kawn Flixx
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Hmm...
This was an okay drop...
could have been alot better..
Structure was okay , alittle off towards the middle..
Concept..was good
Wordplay was okay...
overall keep it up.. you could have made it longer though...
thought it was alittle to short for me...
elevate..Hope to see another drop from you ... 7/10
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