Voted For: Indeph

You just joined Rv and yet your trying to beat me?
Ha , cuz ill gaurentee that the 'polls will disagree'...
New to rv huh?, ..yet you battling a 'vet'?..
'Sit Dog!'..Stay on your one weight level cuz your not on mine yet!...
I think its past your bed time....Put ya rhymes to rest...
Before i put words in ya mouf and give you a cardiac arrest!..
Im embarrasin' ya game..so like muslim women cover up your face..
Cuz to the whole rapverse...and your family...son 'YOUR A DISGRACE'!..
Now im done ...and im taken a break...
Guess you'll just have to learn from this battle mistake...[

That was sick verse, had alot of punches, and your structure was good. It keep me reading, vocab wasn't that big but it was a good verse.

Indeph Are U High U U Must Be Hysterical,
U Think U Gonna Beat Me I Hope U Believe In Miracles
U Flow Is Shit And Ya Rhymes Is Diverse
U Slow Cause U The Wackest Nigga, On Rap Verse
Wake Up, And Smell The Right Hook
Indeph Wake Out That Coma Cause I Got U Shook
It Took Me A While To Post But Trust Me Im Its Not U IM Duckin
I Was At Ya Gurls House And Its My Dick She Suckin
Yea U Feelin Stupid Now U Neva Had A Clue
Cause I Got Ya Jumpin Out Ya Seat Like That Boy In Ring 2
I See K-o And Indeph Ain't Gonna Be O-k
Cause He Can't Move And He Chockin.

Your verse rhymed that about it. It was ok, for you being new and shit, but you might want to start with someone more easy, it didn't really keep me reading, you started off strong, than got weak. You verse was like a stock market...started high..than just dropped.

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