You aren't on beat at all, and the UKish accent is... meh. But your flow is the main thing thats annoying.... its constant and monotone. Your quality sounds ok. Lyrics are ok, aside from it sounding like you're reading them as you go. I'm not really feelin it. But keep it up.

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