Voted For: OneStepBeyond

aiyo....what i saw

limited edish
>Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone...
I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'...
-nice play off the name, set up coulda been better 7/10
>That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation..
'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination...
-kinda already did a name joke...not bad 4/10
>You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare...
Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair...
-meh, played concept, set up was nice 6/10
>What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great...
The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak...
haha, i laughed....8/10
>Dawg before you step up...better get some practices...
Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'...
-meh, not feelin it 5/10

overall: 30/50....not bad, thought some of your lines coulda been better, different wordplay woulda made them more effective, but overall, you came with some decent, creative punches, this was close, one of the reasons you lost some, because you played off his name twice, in two bars, it was kinda herby, ahha, no offense........but pretty good verse man

OSB
>you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend,
you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,*
-set up was whack but personal was nice 7/10
>im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed,
Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest,
-decent 6/10
>read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense,
you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence,
haha, i laughed here, creative 8/10
>i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives,
us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives...
bahh, not feelin it 4/10

>i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck,
cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked..
coulda been worded better, but nice finisher 7/10

overall: 32/50.....word, this was a close battle, i was feelin yours more OSB, both had your notables, both had your write-offs, but i think OSB sneaked this one out with harder punches and keeping it more consistent......it was close, so thats what it came down too, good battle

v/OneStepBeyond......word, rtf if ya could, glockoma battle if ya get the time

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