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Old 04-01-05, 07:08 PM   #23
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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Haha...a'ight in all honesty this battle was one-sided...King Solo came sooo much harder...Acuity...your punches really weren't landing hard...your structure was fucked...Which made your flow go off...and your rhyme scheme was a little bit off too...some lines didn't rhyme with eachother, they had multies in them, but there wasnt a second lin to follow...just work on that. King Solo...some pretty nice punches, some decent personals...Structure was good, flow was nice...you took this just for an overall better verse. Return the favor on me against OneStepBeyond...link is in my sig.
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