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Voted For: Limited Edition
This was a tough one to vote on but in the end L.E. took it.
OSB your lines didn't connect that hard you had a few good job with the no show thing. I felt your metas were a bit basic and in some lines you were missin words or you worded your lines wrong plus they were a bit stretched....Intense and rest don't rhyme and your end rhymes were basic KNIVES LIVES heard it a million times. Your last line you insulted yourself you called yourself a newb. My favorite line of yours was...
you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence
very creative 
LE i liked your rhyming technique syllable compound is off the hook very good i like seein that it's not repetative like regular shit. Good job usin his name against him gave you the uper hand on the personals you also flowed better structure was on point easy to read and a nice closer that added the final punch
favorite line....
I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'
Good job
VOTE/ Limited Edition
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