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villagepimp
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This was okay at best... 6/10... you prolly could have done better with the wordplay and shit... it was basic... decent punchlines... all in all you can and should do better... but don't worry... that's why we here... to elevate....
rtf...
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.
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