Voted For: Tstorm
Tstorm- I didnt get most of the wordplay in your verse. Had a few pretty dope lines though like that period one and the first line. Imma have to say you took this one pretty easily.
Evolution- No offence but not much creativity in that verse, you need to add some wordplay and up your skills with punches but your flow and structures ok I geuss.
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