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omb - i liked yours . but it sorta left me i don't know turned off. i don't know. but you had alot of good vocab and imagery . i just wasnt feeling it. the format of it was a lil off i guess. so it sorta affected the flow you coulda made your lines longer so things would have been more connected and you woudl have been able to drop more.. but none the less a smooth drop

anx.- wow a very very powerful drop. i liked it alot because it was so unique.you really took the topic and juiced it for what it was worth. i liked your imagery alot it took the reader on a ride. a emotional rollercoaster if you must. over all i just connected with your piece because you used strong wordplay and vocab. i could see everything you wrote and thats why i am picking yours because it really allowed the reader to see what was going on

Vote.anxiety because he used a very vivid vocab spread as well as a very very nice topic choice

no hate nice drop to both