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Old 04-02-05, 02:28 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Valor
He had incredible technique
Tremendous rhymes, which many seek
Vivid thoughts, like gigantic explosions
A selective vocabulary, with plenty of emotion
His mind was unstoppable
Being better then him, was impossible
It was like no story ever told
His imagery never grew old
Fool of talent, rhymes were the shit
He had a deep soul that resembled horror flicks
He was slick, and quite so clever
A skilled poet, one of the best ever
His story's were never seen before
However.....
That poet was known as Valor

This was a self glorification open mic rapverse revolution mission with a sick twist to it, so if you dont like it then........

your wack


hey Valor it was cool. Not very complex but the flow was nice. I liked the horror flick line. That was the best line in it. Rhyming was good and some multis were included. For such a short tiny piece I'd say it was cool and decent. More of a freestyle to me than an in depth open mic.
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