yo u gettin better and better man,get at me on msn,ill help you out with a couple of things,...


I was born with dis-beliefs,
pigs in uniform runing tha street's
descoverd i had an incredible technique,
when i die with every breath thats released
youll see my goals have been reached,.........

these lines were cool,but then your lines started to be too short be lines,put CAPITALS everytime you start a new line so it could be more fun to read,